Sunbathing

So all the posts I've done to fill my blogger pantry this weekend have stayed at the office. I forgot to email then to myself. So inteasd of working I sat and layed in Sheeps Medow in the park and watched cute boys walk by. I'm a bit spaced for some reason the lying in the sun has made me tired. I also went out last night and for the first time in a long time had an amazing time, taking home a hot young thing.

Today after much toil, actually years of toil I have come up with the opening of a novel. One I'm giving a face lift to. I can't look at the words anymore and wanted to turn it over to the blogging world, to see what you think of the new opening of Rave.

"Bananas foster was brought to the table, the sauce went on fire and lit up the room. The waiter held a white bag with powder on a silver tray, after beautifully arranging the desert and drizzling the caramel sauce; he opened and gently sprinkled the cocaine like sugar onto the plate. He put the dish in front of Skye and John Simons, smiled then went away. John is a youthful restaurant owner who just opened a place in the village."

Comments

[Kiks]

Mmhhh.... summer... which reminds me that I still need a new summer cologne and white clothes... but comment sans argent?

And that dessert sounds yum! Maybe w/o the Queen. I'm clean ;)

[Noe]

You're a hottie, I think I'd buy any book you're selling.

[Bobby Alexander]

I haven't been following your blog as perhaps I should've, which explains why I'm in the dark about your novel. The excerpt here, however, is good.

[Todd]

Putting cocaine on top of caramel sauce ruins the cocaine AND the caramel sauce.